revising

So this monday, i decided i had some free time while doing laundry.....so i took that time to revise my first essay, the research report. I read over it two times through, gaining a new perspective on it each time. The research plan seemed clear, but it seemed that there was something missing...I never actually said WHAT i would do with my research, so i added a whole section, and included more research into how i would present my findings. Besides that, another major addition was the use of the word "I". My paper lacked that in certain areas which made it read a little awkward, so i tweaked that to sound smoother. Besides this, i scanned and reworked any areas that perhaps needed more clarification, or maybe just needed to be reworded because they were confusing. These were the major revisions i did on monday, along with grammatical errors.