Brochure feedback

the feedback from friday was very useful in adjusting my brochure. From what i got back, it seemed like the brochure had the right information in it and was very attention grabbing. It also seemed like it looked professional and like it could really be put to use. The only issue was the background section which i wrote in paragraph form. it seemed to lose peoples attention and was too lengthy. I plan on breaking it up into smaller sections, perhaps either bullets or smaller paragraphs....but besides that, i was happy with the feedback i got.